Prize amount increased: Need a good sales letter

Looking for a sales letter for my book "how to go to college in seven easy steps." <[login to view URL]> I've attached some writings i had already started... The sales copy needs to be tighter and speak to the needs of the customer more... mostly school administrators, principles and parents. Make 2 different versions of the same letter as it will be a split campaign. I'm giving you a link to poweful sellling words to help make the ad copy strong. Do not be wordy/verbose but make sure the idea is clear. eRJe ## Deliverables Attached is the sales letter i had started... you can use some of the elements from this letter to make your version. also the book is on the amazon link site.