Hello. I would like to assist you in your project. My name is Claudia Eliza, I am a University lecturer of English with a PhD in English language and media studies.
I have been working as an academic teaching English Applied Linguistics, and also as a translator and interpreter for 13 years. Apart from University degrees I hold the Cambridge Certificate of Proficiency in English with max grade A, which means native-like competence, and I work for Cambridge ESOL as English language trainer and assessor.
I can edit your text to make it appealing and I can definitely correct any grammar or vocabulary errors, along with an overall improvement of the coherence level. As it is now, sentences are too long and the punctuation errors affect the accuracy of information. You need to focus on the key words in each message chunk and build info around it!
Good luck with your choice and with your project! I hope you allow me to help you.
Claudia Eliza