I'm an experienced book editor. I'm a native English speaker and edit in American English. I have successfully edited many erotica novels. I provide full-service editing which includes the following:
grammar, spelling, punctuation, syntax, sentence structure, word usage/nuance, repetition, consistency, anomalies, plot holes and paragraph spacing and visual layout; chapter page breaks; correct font and alignment; correct tense; suggestion of using a different word; correct point-of-view (POV) for each scene. The story is kept in the author’s voice. The manuscript is gone over at least twice.
I do use Word's Track Changes feature.
I can provide a one paragraph feedback of what I thought of the story, comments on plot/character development, where it can be improved, etc.
Please contact me for further details. I look forward to hearing from you! References are available upon request.