Acadmic writing

I'm looking to do some of work in my literature review : 1-The currently structure of the literature review provides a summary of the main and seminal literature. However, it doesn’t have an appropriate summary that derives the critical outcomes of the review. A mini-plenary should be added to each sub-section of the literature review to critically analyse the findings and shows its connection to the candidates own research.  100 words for each one such as this following sections : 2.1.1 Collaborative Learning 2.3.10 Multi-touch Table for Collaborative Learning – Examples and Methods used in Previous Studies 2.6 Pair Programming – Previous Studies 2-The literature review must specifically identify what are the shortcomings of the area that the candidates research is addressing. 6-Much of literature review is dated. The candidate should do a small extension to the literature review to cover: 3- More recent literature in a summary format and show that the findings of the main literature body is still relevant. 8- Present other approaches of achieving collaborative pair programming such online real-time sharing tools such as: Google Docs, Screenshero, Pages, Collabedit, Ehterpad etc. all in three pages only between 700-1000 words.