Hello. I am a sub-editor and copy writer with over 20 years' experience. I can rewrite band biographies easily. The rewritten work will be error-free, entertaining, informative and original. Actually, as a music buff, I would love this task. My bid of $30 is for 12 rewrites.
However, I don't see any attached wiki file to give you the example you crave. Maybe you could attach it later and send an update. I'd be happy to provide you with a sample of my work.
Hope to hear from you soon.
Cheers.
Phil.