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revision

hi here is a revision, little different concept from my previous entry. what do you think about this?

Contest Entry #45 for                                                 Graphic for book and ecourse

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  • bjonesyyy
    Contest Holder
    • 5 years ago

    The style of the wind you did in the one just before this I feel would flow nicely

    • 5 years ago
  • bjonesyyy
    Contest Holder
    • 5 years ago

    It is pretty interesting, could you make the clouds and the smoke and sky fade together a little more subtly? And I think also it would make sense if there was like green grass on the rocks by the water like fading into dry and burned grass on the side with the fire.

    • 5 years ago