Hey,
I took a look at your requirements and also checked your provided info doc about the company, so I assume you are looking for a good EXPLAINER VIDEO.
Speaking about the video, it has to be specific and vivid that people can remember.
I did already a small draft, here it is:
-This is Mark,
-He has a brilliant vision to provide a service to people, where they could control their house electronic systems with a click a button from their phones!
-Whether they want to lock their doors, open their electronic gates or just switch on their alarm - all done from their smart devices!
-Unfortunately, Mark understands in order to realize his vision, he needs at least $44,289 for the initial investment to start and maintain his cash flow for a few months to get things going, on top of that he needs to get an accredited license in order to be able to sell his system.
-This leaves Mark and many other entrepreneurs in shackles that prevents them from fulfilling their visions.
- We at the RI Technology don't think that should be the case...
this is it for now if we could jump on a quick 5-min Skype call, I could go even in much deeper detail, about your target audience.