Hi there
We are looking to get a prof person to have a look at our 2 websites.?
Probably totals at around 800 words. Just seems to need a skilled eye to read over.?
The text is for a property investment and refurbishment website.?
Feel free to ask any questions.?
cheers
shaun
## Deliverables
* * *This broadcast message was sent to all bidders on Tuesday Jun 8, 2010 4:48:29 AM:
Hi Now that bidding has ended - i've removed a lot of people who bid and am emailing the rest of you, which is about 10 bidders. The website to sort out the text for is [login to view URL] [login to view URL] The text on the Property Specialist site is being changed within the next few days, so please only use that as a guide. Let me know your thoughts - we're essentially looking for the text to be simplified and given a professional feel/read as we wrote it ourselves when starting out a few years ago and it needs sorting out. Thanks Shaun
* * *This broadcast message was sent to all bidders on Monday Jun 14, 2010 4:05:35 PM:
Hi, I have shortened each tab into bullet points - which essentially contains info that's on each tab and relevant. As there is a bit of rambling that we do not particularly want edited .. so figured it easier to word what is contained in the bullet points as opposed to the re wording and neatening up of existing text. Please let me know if you are ok with this. thanks shaun